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brockglaze
Junior Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 21
Muncie,Indiana,USA

0 posted 1999-07-13 09:38 AM


This poem is entitled "My Love for You"

A powerful locomotive
Careening headlong
Down silver straight
And endless tracks
Hot roaring furnace
Strong rumbling engine
Cotton clouds of steam
Billowing from the stack.

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Brock J. Glaze

© Copyright 1999 brockglaze - All Rights Reserved
alisanichols
New Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 5
Daleville, Indiana
1 posted 1999-07-14 01:26 PM


this has to be one of the best poems ive ever read, you should publish your work! that is beautiful, but may i ask who you wrote this poem for? great job!

Alisa

brockglaze
Junior Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 21
Muncie,Indiana,USA
2 posted 1999-07-14 01:28 PM


yes, Alisa, i wrote this poem for my girlfriend of 2 years... she has inspired all of my poetry, i love her so much!

by the way, thanx for all the compliments on my poems!

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Brock J. Glaze

alisanichols
New Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 5
Daleville, Indiana
3 posted 1999-07-14 01:28 PM


your welcome! you deserve them, you are truly an artist!

Alisa

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