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heaven_0401
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0 posted 07-13-99 07:38 AM       View Profile for heaven_0401   Email heaven_0401   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for heaven_0401

I look in the mirror
And what do i see?
A startling reflection
Staring back at me

I wonder
What am i supposed to be
As i slowly drown
In the deep blue sea

All i can see
Is me, me,me
Thats exactly what i don't want to be

I wish i was someone different
In every way
Why does my world have to be this way

How am I supposed to feel?
When it all seems to real

What am i?
Who am i?

Someone who i hate
If only i knew my fate
I'm afraid i already do
And it depresses me
More than you
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Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
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1 posted 11-14-2007 07:15 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
Zaineb
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2 posted 05-22-2009 10:09 AM       View Profile for Zaineb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zaineb

This is amazing, i know the problem so well, and i can really see myself in this poem, it say soo much, without lying, the fellings are so real,
I LOVE IT ALOT
 
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