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heaven_0401
Junior Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 19
Australia

0 posted 1999-07-13 07:38 AM


I look in the mirror
And what do i see?
A startling reflection
Staring back at me

I wonder
What am i supposed to be
As i slowly drown
In the deep blue sea

All i can see
Is me, me,me
Thats exactly what i don't want to be

I wish i was someone different
In every way
Why does my world have to be this way

How am I supposed to feel?
When it all seems to real

What am i?
Who am i?

Someone who i hate
If only i knew my fate
I'm afraid i already do
And it depresses me
More than you
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[This message has been edited by heaven_0401 (edited 07-19-99).]

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-14 07:15 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Zaineb
Junior Member
since 2009-05-22
Posts 27
Denmark
2 posted 2009-05-22 10:09 AM


This is amazing, i know the problem so well, and i can really see myself in this poem, it say soo much, without lying, the fellings are so real,
I LOVE IT ALOT

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