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Ashlie693
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since 1999-07-08
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0 posted 1999-07-12 11:20 PM


Footsteps...
I hear them, the steps getting closer to my bedroom door.
I await those footsteps nearing my bed, the moment I will be with you again.
They are there, but I think only because of the longing in my heart

Your voice...
I wake up to hear you, calling out for me
You are telling me you love me
And that you will ease all of this pain you have caused
Your voice is there, but I think only because I loved those beautiful words of love you spoke to me.

Your smell...
Thoughts of you run through my mind, your scent tickles my nose, sitting alone in my room.
Your smell is here, but I think only because I long to be close enough to you to have that scent on my own body once again.

Your touch...
The only thing I no longer wake up to.
The only thing I cannot feel without you here.
The electricity that goes throughout my body when you touch me, can no longer be felt.
Your touch is no longer here, and I hope that someday I will be able to not have to imagine all these other things, and once again you will be in my arms.


-Ashlie




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Lovemaster
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 3
E-falmouth, MA/ US
1 posted 1999-07-13 09:13 AM


Your poem was sweet yet sad it reminds me of lost relationships
Lovemaster
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 3
E-falmouth, MA/ US
2 posted 1999-07-13 09:14 AM


LOVE SUCKS DOESNT IT
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