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princezz
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 8
Brighton, MI, USA

0 posted 1999-07-12 06:45 PM


Something in me died last night,
I cannot help but to obsess and care,
Last night I lost a part of me ,
It really wasn't fair.
I lost a solemn part of me,
Taking with it joy and glee.
Something in me died last night,
It left me sick and full of fright.
It took the shine out of my light,
It broke my heart and blurred my sight.
I only wish I had got the clue,
Last night I lost a part of me,
That part of me was ...
you.

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-11-14 07:13 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

shattered-smiles
Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
2 posted 2008-01-20 09:50 PM


Great poem.  I really enjoyed it.  Keep up the work.

[&] she's a blood broken rose

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