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orpheus
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since 1999-07-10
Posts 30
Portugal

0 posted 1999-07-11 05:14 PM


You say you love me
You say I hate you
But it was my soul you broke
It was you who cut me deeper
It was your lies I heard the most
And then you start crying
But it is my tear that melts the sorrow
(So desperately I love you)
You liar
You never gave yourself
You were always someone else
Not the poem you once wrote
Not that smile
That fantasy
You hold my hands
I run from you
That's enough!
You hurt me so!
When I touch you I steal nothing
You never let
You never could
You never wanted us to be
Each other's thief
And now it's over
I'm half a lover





[This message has been edited by orpheus (edited 07-11-99).]

© Copyright 1999 orpheus - All Rights Reserved
Joshua
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa
1 posted 1999-07-11 07:50 PM


Ouch! That hurts me, and i don't even know the story behind it

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*


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