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orpheus Junior Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 30Portugal |
I suppose who is and has been Has already seen felt The hands full And the full hands becoming empty Naked at the cold Because when we hold grab Too tight Something precious We suffocate The smiles and the kisses We die a little And we don´t even cry The little lost piece of soul Forgotten (You don't cry what you forget) I have had my hands full And I have had them full of nothing |
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Gedanken Junior Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 16New york |
nice poem, well constructed and creates thought, nice job check my poems if you get a chance |
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Seeking77 Junior Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 24Irvine california |
You have written one of the best poems I have ever read...it's very relative and something to think about..I will remember it always...Thanks! |
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katrina Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 41White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A |
wonderfull poem! |
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orpheus Junior Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 30Portugal |
I'm touched by your openess to my poem. I hope you can all take something of my written feelings, a.k.a poems. Thank you! |
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mandas_1 New Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 5Irving,TX. USA |
great poem, lots can relate to it, thanx |
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Cosey Junior Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 14To., Ont, Can. |
Those last two lines are absolutely gorgeous |
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orpheus Junior Member
since 1999-07-10
Posts 30Portugal |
I must thank you all once again. I guess you all understood the meaning of the poem. Even though some of the beauty of poetry lives in the personal and free interpretation of each word, it's great to be understood. Thanks |
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