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Joshua
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since 1999-07-08
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phoenix,az,usa

0 posted 1999-07-10 09:01 PM


When we were young i never invisioned that
My first kiss would involve your tongue
When we kissed i never suspected that
In your absence you would be missed
When we walked in the park
And saw that dove
I never knew that i had fallen in love
When we talked on the phone i wouldn't have guesed that we would share this home
when we go out tonight
You'll have no clue
That i'm going to ask
To spend the rest of my life with you!!!


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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal te experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*


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Joshua
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa
1 posted 1999-07-10 09:05 PM


sorry about any type-o's i'm not the best speller õ¿õ

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal te experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*



Joshua
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa
2 posted 1999-07-12 02:57 AM


yet another odity A poem i wrote for me/ well semi-for me

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic*

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*
"I don't write poetry for me or about my experiences, I rely on others for that. I write poetry for others." *Me*




[This message has been edited by Joshua (edited 07-12-99).]

katrina
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 41
White Bear Lake, Minnesota, U.S.A
3 posted 1999-07-12 12:33 PM


beautiful poem, it really captures you! Great job
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