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Darm31
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 22
westminster ca usa

0 posted 1999-07-09 04:45 PM


He used to be so happy
He never felt this way
Now that time has passed
He is really gonna change

The world is getting harder
Can he handle what's to come?
Should I help him with his problems?
Are his emotions going numb?

Does he care to live?
Does he really want to go?
If he left this world, then I'd never know

I wish that I could help him...I'm reaching out my hand
He doesn't want to grasp it
So I have this simple plan:
I'm gonna do the only thing I have left
to do...

I'm gonna close my eyes and ask the Lord to help me too.

This poem is for a friend that thinks life is not worth living, but just remember there are others who feel the same. We have to keep eachother going. I do care...ALOT.


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HerLoss
New Member
since 1999-07-09
Posts 5
Westminster, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-07-09 04:52 PM


Yeah, great poem. It's not time that really changes a person, it's really the other person that changes the person. I am sure you understand. :0)


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