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Gedanken
Junior Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 16
New york

0 posted 1999-07-09 12:27 PM


I stand staring at you--eye to eye

My heart has the sensation if could fly

You stare back at me and to me this you send

I hold you dear to me but your just a friend

This comes to me not as a shock

As my heart falls apart like an unwound clock

I look at you and try to utter the words--why?

But all that was said-----was the sleared words of goodby


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I say to all who listens, we'll never win!!

© Copyright 1999 Gedanken - All Rights Reserved
Darm31
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 22
westminster ca usa
1 posted 1999-07-09 03:46 PM


I had to read it a few times over...but I liked it, I know exactly what you're saying...sometimes it hurts, you either have to be something or nothing at all...I feel the same thats why I wrote my poem called "REWIND" ...read it if you have a chancce.
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