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Charlie
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since 1999-07-09
Posts 11
australia

0 posted 1999-07-09 11:30 AM


I see you sitting there,
Acting as though nothing had happened.
I know i can't talk to you,
As we are forbidden to be even friends.
Yet we are more than friends,
We are lovers away from people.
We are not aloud to express ourselfves infront of people,
But to each other we express ourselves like no two people have before.

Kissing you is so indescribable,
Its like Silk on my naked body.
When you kiss me my world stops,
I almost forget to breathe.
I almost forget to stop..
I never want to stop.
I never want to leave your side,
I shouldn't be at your side,
Its wrong we'ver been told.
I could get you in trouble.
But i just can't help it,
I look at you and see the love that i feel.
I just can't stop seeing you,
I need you so badly

© Copyright 1999 Charlie - All Rights Reserved
aramena
New Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 9
USA
1 posted 1999-07-09 01:15 PM


wow that was deep it reminded me of a situation that i was in
Darm31
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 22
westminster ca usa
2 posted 1999-07-09 03:49 PM


great poem! You weren't afraid to share too much with the reader but in away you let them in without forgetting it was only a poem...great poem!
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