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splifstar
Junior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 10
ma.

0 posted 1999-07-09 10:53 AM


I TRY TO READ YOUR MIND.
it is similar to myne.
WHY DONT YOU JUST SAY IT
and everything will be
FINE

please dont sit here and
STALL. PUT DOWN YOUR WALL
so i can see it all.
I WANT TO HEAR SOMTHING
not nothing at all.

WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS,
cant you just end it? is
THERE A REASON WHY YOU
dont send it? thats right
I SAID BECAUSE I MEANT IT.

if you are scared that is
FINE. I JUST HOPE ONE DAY
you will reply

© Copyright 1999 splifstar - All Rights Reserved
Darm31
Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 22
westminster ca usa
1 posted 1999-07-09 03:52 PM


WHat exactly was this poem about to you..I know it could have many different meanings but to you was it a love letter which had never been returned or something never said by the one you loved?? Reply if you read this please!! THanks!
splifstar
Junior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 10
ma.
2 posted 1999-07-10 05:45 PM


his poem meant a number of things to me.
its more of a good bye i will always love you type thing....and the one i love is to scared to reply even though she might feel the same....

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