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Darm31
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 22
westminster ca usa

0 posted 1999-07-09 06:41 AM

Can't we just stop and hit rewind?

Pretend this never happend
Forget we played this game

We're better off as friends
I think we need our space

This doesn't mean it's over
Let's take another place...a different view,
Another way
We Know this isn't working...can't it be the same?
Before we were together
Why did it have to change?

If there's nohing left to say,
do me a favor..Hit REWIND and then press play.

Let's just start new from here...leaving everything behind and accepting everything that's yet to come.

Darm31
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 22
westminster ca usa

1 posted 1999-07-09 06:43 AM

This poem was written for a FRIEND and you know who you are. Thank you!

roxy8365
Junior Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 27
e.falmouth MA usa

2 posted 1999-07-09 12:09 PM

good job!!i was recently in a relationship just like that. i liked it a lot!!! great job!!!

Darm31
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 22
westminster ca usa

3 posted 1999-07-09 03:42 PM

THanks for the reply.....I was hoping that others could relate..I think everyone can once in their life time.

Ashlie693
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 25

4 posted 1999-07-10 08:51 PM

Wow. another GREAT poem. this one reminds me of my best friend of over 5 years. We havent talked since around June b/c of some things she said about me, but reading that, I thinK I am ready to forget about it and have her as a friend again. I am sending it to her, with your permission of course? I will give u the credit too, but could I use it? Thank you a lot and reply quickly to my e-mail address: Ashlie693@aol.com. Thank you!

Joshua
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

5 posted 1999-07-10 09:27 PM

I am in that predicament now and it
lessens the pain to know that others are
there too!
Thank You!

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"Poetry is an orphan of scilence. The words never quite equal te experiece behind them." *Charles Simic

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

6 posted 1999-07-11 01:45 PM

Boy! Could I have used that rewind button a few times in my life. Thanks for the great poem.

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