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foxy
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 3
Falmouth, MA, U.S.

0 posted 1999-07-08 11:06 AM


I feel myself trembling as I hear him grow near,
too overwhelmed by the tight grip of fear,
I hear him getting closer, but I can't seem to run,
I'm the last an fianl stop before his job is done.
I will not go easy into the dying light,
I won't let him take me into the blackened night.
But as death's solemn gaze fell sadly to my face,
My soul was gripped with sorrow upon his cold embrace.
For the only thing death wanted was what I'd tried to flee,
Poor death was doomed to roam the earth for all eternity.

© Copyright 1999 foxy - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 1999-07-08 07:10 PM


Wow! I got chills reading this. You definitely have a talent, foxy, and I hope you continue to write and post here. WELCOME!

Thanks for sharing this with us.

dp

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-07-15 08:05 AM


Had to move this up. You might consider posting this in Open forum.

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heaven_0401
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since 1999-07-12
Posts 19
Australia
3 posted 1999-07-16 05:51 AM


Fozy you have a obvious and marvellous talent, and i commend you on this brave piece of writing
I hope you continue to write poems on here

Love Heaven

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