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LoveStruck
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since 1999-07-08
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Southwest Missouri, USA

0 posted 1999-07-08 12:41 PM


You went to the party, you didn't drink.
If only others would stop and think.
You got in the car, only to go home.
The other guy, shouldn't have drove.
He had too much, now it's too late.
I hate to think that this is your fate.

Your mother's crying, your father's solemn.
Your brother's confused, your sister too.
They wonder how this could happen to you.
I wonder too, how this could be true.
I don't blame GOD, it's not his fault.
I only wish, the other guy would have thought.
I just wish he wouldn't have drank.
You're gone now and I have him to thank.
I will miss you forever, this is my last chance to say.
I just hope I'll see you again someday.

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<3 :^*

[This message has been edited by LoveStruck (edited 07-08-99).]

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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
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1 posted 1999-07-08 01:23 AM


A beautifully sad tale...good job on writing about the tragic effects that a drunk driver has on others. I cannot wait to read more.

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*Krista Knutson*

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