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Domina Starwolf New Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 6Minnesota |
A hand on a shoulder A tear in an eye I say what a blunder And ask myself why Twirling around in a dance I don't know Raising my hands and voice to the sky Stomping my feet and falling to the snow And still, I ask myself why Trickling the blood and streaking the tears The days go on by and by Shrouding myself and shrinking from fears I'll never understand why I walk out of the clouds and smell the fresh air Looking ot the sun, I hear myself cry I feel a hand on my shoulder and wind in my hair And finally I realize why. |
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bucky New Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 9falmoth,mass usa |
nice poem it is worded great |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wonderful job, I liked this quite a bit. Cannot wait for more!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* |
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Delilah Junior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 36The Wonderful America |
Beautiful |
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