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Teen Poetry #1

the world

pun83
Junior Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 26
FALMOUTH ,MA. U.S.A

0 posted 1999-07-07 10:54 AM

this is such a cruel world
it makes you kinda think
of how people work and do
how really low they sink
the world is such an erie place
what are we to do
to think of all the creeps and things
it is like a pile of poo
the world is such a pretty place
lets look and see
of all the creations and beautiful things
of what we all should be

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 1999-07-07 08:57 PM

Pretty good start..... I expect to see some pretty good work out of you....

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-07-99).]

nick
New Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 8

2 posted 1999-07-08 08:55 AM

it was funny

pun83
Junior Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 26
FALMOUTH ,MA. U.S.A

3 posted 1999-07-13 08:54 AM

that was a good job habeeb

habeebpetersen@hotmail
Junior Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 28
falmouth MA usa

4 posted 1999-07-13 09:04 AM

thanx.......i guess

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