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habeebpetersen@hotmail
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since 1999-07-07
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falmouth MA usa

0 posted 1999-07-07 09:03 AM


apples red and green
taste like sugar make you lean
bigger than a bean

© Copyright 1999 habeebpetersen@hotmail - All Rights Reserved
SuGaH2432
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 2
E.Falmouth mass usa
1 posted 1999-07-07 09:10 AM


hey tom that was a very unusally poem
bucky
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 9
falmoth,mass usa
2 posted 1999-07-07 09:12 AM


it was really quite good, Bucky...

...perhaps you didn't hear me when I said that comments need to be appropriate for others to read? or perhaps you're forgetting who's doing the grading in this class?...........Ms. Ness




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roxy8365
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 27
e.falmouth MA usa
3 posted 1999-07-07 09:15 AM


hey baby!!! you dont know me, but i know you!!!nice poem!!!!!its very passionate and deep!!!call me sometime!!!you sound like such a sweet guy!!!!
love,
your secret admirer

bucky
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since 1999-07-07
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falmoth,mass usa
4 posted 1999-07-07 09:15 AM


bucky will get just what he deserves......



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pun83
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 26
FALMOUTH ,MA. U.S.A
5 posted 1999-07-07 11:10 AM


tight peom
whats the werd nerd

muny
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since 1999-07-07
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falmouth mass usa
6 posted 1999-07-07 03:20 PM





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muny
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 10
falmouth mass usa
7 posted 1999-07-07 03:21 PM


bucky rules....

And each successive inappropriate comment....



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muny
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 10
falmouth mass usa
8 posted 1999-07-07 03:21 PM


bucky rules

...is guaranteed to be detrimental to your final grade

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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
9 posted 1999-07-07 08:30 PM


I like it, Tom - Very cute, indeed...

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