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Gphabs
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since 1999-07-02
Posts 1
Claymont, DE, US

0 posted 1999-07-02 04:48 PM


All the people think I am crazy for you
But they never knew who are you
All I know, is what u know, that i know, that no other people know
YO
XOXOXO
When we really could be together
Our love would be much better
Like in my favorite song
now don’t get me wrong
but here it goes
“They said I was too crazy,
for you lady,
but they don’t see,
how u kiss me loving me”
Don’t you like how that flows
I don’t care how people say about how we goes
It’s our love is what really shows
I am confused
All I want is for you not to refuse
And what I am going to tell you is true
And that is I love you
I wish I could go to Six Flag
or some movie that is so funnie, like Austin Powers trying to shag
I wandt us to go on a love boat
Where we float
Drinking coke (“Not the sniffing kind”, said the Jimmy angel.)
If you really want me to really love you (“I do luv ya, but true love”, The angel again.)
You must tell your brother what is true
I would tell my bro what is true
But that might not be cool
Might say sumting to your bro that is wrong
and our love would be gone
I love you and that is true
The only way to find out if you love me if you ask your bro

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aramena
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since 1999-07-03
Posts 9
USA
1 posted 1999-07-03 09:28 PM


hi i really liked your poem really liked it. maybe we can switch poems or something e-mail me at ajg@surfshop.net =) *smile*
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