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Whau2251
Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17
Hanford,California,U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-06-25 08:19 PM


All the memmories
All the good times
You made that time shine
Boy you were so fine

I thought you treated me right
but that was all a lie

Now you leave me in the dark
you left a big bad mark
Why are you doing this to me

You told me you cared and loved me
but when I needed you , you weren't there

I can't feel the pain
There is no hurt and suffering
because I won't be here anymore






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*OoOoAudrey AuoOoO*
"Music is my life,without it, I would not be alive."

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abra-cadabra
Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA
1 posted 1999-06-27 02:22 AM


heart break is a horrible thing and boys don't give a damn either way. but, it teaches us to be stronger. and it's a good thing to let your emotions out. whether it be through writing or telling a friend. your writing is beautiful. keep it up!

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Jamie
~don't let your love pass you by....~

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