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Teen Poetry #1

Tomorrow

abra-cadabra
Member

since 1999-06-21

Posts 75
Florissant, Missouri, USA

0 posted 1999-06-25 01:06 AM

Why do we go away?
More and more die everyday
A new friend is born when an old friend dies
An old mother weeps while a new mother cries
Emotions of love plus hurt equal fear
And we lose someone we hold so dear
Yesterday, today, and tmorrow bring pain
As more of our loved ones leave on a train
To some place we don't know of
Maybe it's some place up above
And maybe something will come to take the place
But we've already been lost in space
Their reasons for leaving remain unknown
While sorrow and pain are the only things shown
Why do we hurt? Why do we hate?
With everyday, we come closer to fate
How long do we have to repent when we've caused others sorrow?
We'll never know, there may be no tomorrow

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Jamie
~don't let your love pass you by....~

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-26 09:44 PM

Wow, I can't believe I missed this one. Extremely well written. I enjoyed it quite a bit and cannot wait to see more!

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*Krista Knutson*

Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

2 posted 1999-06-30 06:06 PM

This poem is truly beautiful! I agree with Alwye, it's written very well.

*~*~Raven*~*~

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

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