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Krystal Klear
New Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 7
Phoenix Arizona USA

0 posted 1999-06-21 03:09 AM


Not a day goes by
That I don't think of you,
That I don't cry.

You broke my heart,
To an un-fixable state,
Why do I have to feel pain?

Because of you...
The sky is not as blue,
The grass is not as green.

I feel the pain and ask myself, WHY?
Why do I feel the aftermath of your love?
It's not fair!

Until I find a man to trust,
Or to love again...
I will forever feel this pain.

© Copyright 1999 Krystal Klear - All Rights Reserved
Whau2251
Junior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 17
Hanford,California,U.S.A.
1 posted 1999-06-21 03:51 PM


Great poem. I used to feel that way ALL the time and it was such a struggle to move on and I had so much pain. This poems sums up eveything. Good job.

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theduck52
New Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2

2 posted 1999-06-24 01:08 AM


Hey krystal, awesome poem. I'm serious. I am really sorry that you had to go through that, and i hope that you never have to go through that again. Very good poem.
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