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Krystal Klear
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since 1999-06-16
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Phoenix Arizona USA

0 posted 1999-06-16 10:47 PM


They say love is wonderful
They say love is great!
But in the end, it's nothing but hate.
I know it's over, I know it's through
But it seems to me
Life's a bitch without you!

I cried for days
Picking all the flaws of myself,
I figured I had done something wrong.
I told myself to get over you,
That there were many more to choose from.

Yet I couldn't bring myself to it,
I had pushed people away.
And I felt I was in my own prison.
The only key to get me out,
Was to have love and trust again.

I had thought about death,
I had thought of it well.
To me it seemed life was nothing!
I knew I had fallen,
Too hard and too fast for you,
I still know we are through.


You say you love me and you care,
But you played with my heart,
Like it was a toy,
And when that toy got old,
You went for something new.

Although in the end,
I can't bear to look at you!

© Copyright 1999 Krystal Klear - All Rights Reserved
Raven
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA
1 posted 1999-06-16 11:12 PM


I think love is hate. I mean, the ones you love the most are the ones who can hurt you the most, because they mean so much to you. Then you hate them, but it's been said that hate is close to love. It seems like guys love taking advantage of the hearts of girls who so easily fall in love, it hurts, but it's better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all.


~Raven~

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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2 posted 1999-06-16 11:51 PM


I think that so many parts of this poem ring true, especially at that bitter point right after you are rejected. But I also agree with Raven that it is better to have loved and loss then to have never loved at all. All in all a very good piece of work.
Emmarusell
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 4
Juarez, Chihuahua, Mexico.
3 posted 1999-06-17 02:16 PM


Two weeks ago I broke up with my boyfriend, we were together for almost 3 years,and I love him so much, but at the same time I hate him. There's only a footstep from love to hate, I used to think that I couldn't let him go, but now I'm learning to feel that I don't need him by my side to love him, Everyday I wake up saying myself that I must forget him, but the truth it's that everyday I love him more, and now I don't fear it any longer, cause I know that I'm always going to be with him, cause my love is strong, even If I don't see him again...
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