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She Sighed Softly
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She Sighed Softly |
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RaiN J. CaSteeL New Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 4Union, NJ |
i dont know if this is good...but here it goes  She Sighed Softly.... As the fire flickered And the clock chimed 7 She sighed softly As he became her For a while they laid Still... Capturing the moment Their souls merging As if it were their last Time together... The without a sound He moved softly Rhythmically... Time ceased to exist As his movements Became more demanding And yet still gentle His eyes glued to hers His thoughts flowing into her "I love you" Said mutually inside Yet held back... And then let out She moaned... It was as if there was no room No light outside As if the world broke away And left them There to stay... She floated higher Grasping his shoulders She felt his shivers... And finally breathing in heaven And exhaling pleasure They felt release.... Trembling... Hearts rapidly beating Their souls Dancing happily.... As the fire flickered The clock chimed 8 She sighed softly And he became her.... ------------------ As the fire flickered And the clock chimed 7 She sighed softly As he became her Rain J. Casteel |
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Raven Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 67Hopewell Jct, New York, USA |
This poem is very good, and very moving too. I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the near future ~Raven~ |
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RaiN J. CaSteeL New Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 4Union, NJ |
I have a lot of my poems in a love poem web site its www.lovepoems.com go to submitted poems then to author search...when there click on "C" and find my name hope you like them ------------------ As the fire flickered And the clock chimed 7 She sighed softly As he became her Rain J. Casteel |
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