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Teen Poetry #1

Emotion Potion

invertigo18
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 04:14 PM

And only angels see
What the mind bereaves.
Taken on up
The pain floats in the sky.
Fallen to the ground.
A tear falls from your eye.

Balanced is what we are.
Kept from floating away.
By the gravity of our emotions
Mixed inside as secret potions.
On raven's wings we carry them wary
That sometimes they may get scary.

Wisdom is our only ally.
Knowledge is our only insight.
We focus on these to get through the day.
Not listening to what our emotions say.

Consistently angry.
Persistently loved.
Our conscience is weak.
And all of the above.

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Luke Cakalic

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-06-16 02:03 AM

Very cool! I like it a lot! I can relate to it.

*Alwye- AKA- Krista Knutson*

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Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

2 posted 2002-07-27 10:35 AM

"And all of the above."

That's got to be the coolest way to end a poem!

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-13 07:49 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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