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Raven
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

0 posted 1999-06-14 05:34 PM


*Please Decide*

"Please decide," says Suicide;
"I have many others to see."
"Just close your eyes and step aside,"
"You were never meant to be."

"Don't take a breath," says the Black of Death;
"It will be quicker this way through."
"All the people that you loved most,"
"Never even loved you."

Hear you cry
Tears in your eyes
Now they can bury you

~Raven~




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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

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xave
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 5
Camp Lejeune, NC, USA
1 posted 1999-06-22 06:01 PM


I've felt that way before...but I'm glad I didn't act on my feelings...Actually, what I did do was get my parents to get me an anti-depressant...lol...But seriously, I think suicide is such a waste...I would love to love someone unconditionally...no questions asked, just take them into my heart and make them at home.
Raven
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA
2 posted 1999-06-22 09:33 PM


Xave,

The same thing happened with my parents, actully I got put on so many different types of medicines, just to see what would work. Prozac, Zoloft, the anti-depressants. And then the stimulants: Ritalin, Adderol, Dexidrine...it's a never ending process, lol.I used to want to kill myself just so they would realize how much they missed me, and would love me and feel sorry that they hadn't realized it while I was alive. Stupid I guess...

Raven

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