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m48
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0 posted 12-03-2009 07:42 PM       View Profile for m48   Email m48   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for m48


hello all could some more people please take a look at some of my work? im fairly new and i would like some feedback asap. PLEASE!
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1 posted 12-03-2009 08:42 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Hi and welcome ~

Where did you post your poems?  The best way to receive feedback is to take the time and enjoy other's poetry too.  When you provide feedback, you tend to receive it.  So, let us know where you have posted - and jump in and read and write and enjoy.

Again, welcome to PiP.



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2 posted 12-05-2009 07:28 PM       View Profile for Desirer4New   Email Desirer4New   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Desirer4New

I agree, When i first started writing here even ever i posted a topic i always read and gave advice and commented on others work at the same time. It helps others and you'd be surprised at how many people comment and advise what you right too.
Welcome!
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