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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
hey im new here and also i do rite good poems myslef but im trying to submit my poems here but it wont work and also u see im a girl and i have alot of guy freinds i never had a boy freind but i have liked ppl and also i do have girl freinds too but not taht much anywasy i do rite alot of love poems dealing with freindship cuz i liked 2 of my freinds now i like my other friend and i dont kwno wut to do he is really ncie and i do help him alot but he doesnt know how i feel about him would u guys like to help me out here |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome! Would like to see some of your work. Rae |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
welcome to pip  what forum were you trying to post in? If you click on new topic just like you did in here, in the forum that you want your poem to go into, then type in or copy and paste in your poem and hit submit, it will post it. hope that helps |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
or how about if i just rite here if u guys would like to see but u see im a 10th grade student and i think im the one whos younger in here im in high school i finished my 1st notebook and riting in my second one rite now |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
ok here is the poem that i rote and its called my fragile heart also i rote it this frday of november the 16th MY FRAGILE HEART my fragile heart which is so curios which is in excrutiating pain so fragile that its going to break so fragile that i could feel all the loneliness around me so desperate that i need of u dont make me suffer the pain i feel so lonely and desperate and i could feel the way my fragiel hear is crying its not crying tears but crying blodd all i could see is blak no colors i dont know wut happend to my fragile heart it was happy loving caring but someone made made my fragile heart this way i am so desperate so lonely nothing is full of life it seems like everythings dead it seems like theres no life where ever i go i heare those sad songs seeing ppl sad but my fragile heart is crying deep inside and other ppl arnt noticing me my fragile heart that became weak but still has faith my fragile heart that still loves u my fragile heart that becaem urs but i dont know wut to do but when i see u my fragiel heart starts to beat rapidly and quickly and it feels like that u pierced a thorn in my fragile heart because u only like me as a freind just imaging wut im going through can u even feel the pain that im in do u evne knwo tht my fragile desperate heart needs u me just shivering and cant control my self my fragile heart and i becoming so pale like the peach it seems like i amd dieng becasue fo u i am trying to warm my self but it doesnt seem like its working just come back and and make my fraagile heart happy againg bring colors into my life again let me feel teh joy let me feel the happiness my fragile heart wants to be urs only urs so let it be urs i gave my fragile heart to u so u give me urs i loveu so much and so does my fragile heart but soemtimes it seems like my fragile heart ahs a hole cuz of the way i feel and my fragile heart does not feel energetic it feels low my fragile heart is shrinking th love that i have for other ppl cuz my fragile heart is starting to give hatred and being negative about everything and being desperate for the love tht my fragile heart needs sometimes i think about how i would do without u cuz u supported me in everyway since im ur freind u should be concerend about me but i always always try to meak it obvious that i love u but i wonder y u never notcied me sometimes when i would be tlaking about u it seems like my fragile heart starts to pump more blood or sometimes i feel like oozing my blood out i never felt thsi sad before nor did my heart now i am so bored to death and my fragile heart is waiting for u to love me bak and wiating ofr the bright days to come bak my fragile heart which is so curisous which is in excrutiang pain so fragile that its going to break and so fragile that i could feel all the loneliness aorund me so desperate that i need of u my fragile fragile heart which broke BY ME oh yea and tell me if this poem was deep |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
if you want more folks to read your poetry, may I suggest to you that you post in the teen forum? There are a lot of great kids your age(ish) and you would get great feedback in there...and? this is a duscussion forum, not for posting poetry, but more for talking about stuff. If you look up in the left corner you will see where it says main forums, click on that and then you will see open, dark, and teen...click on teen or open or dark if you would like, then post in there. |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
reply thansk ok man i got inspired with some of the poems that i read on here whne ever im bore di read poems on here it helps me alot and i love to read alot too |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Welcome oh and a word of advice you do know how to make sure your poem is under a topic so it can be read right?? Kate |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
haha im somewhat new to this and welcome to PIP!!! ~Zach~ |
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