Sycamore, IL, USA
Welcome to the blue pages of PIP! Your poem would do better if it were posted in one of the poetry forums. This one is more for discussions than poetry postings.
Your post is so very sad, I pray it's not something happening to you or yours. Unfortunately, we know these things do take place far too often.
[This message has been edited by sandgrain (09-14-2007 09:33 PM).]