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courtneyy
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since 2007-09-12
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0 posted 2007-09-12 07:09 PM


Shes hurting but noone nos in her life this is how it goes..she gets hit at school and hit at home nothing this girl can call her own she runs away as far as she can neevr to be found is this girls plan..Curling up in a ball hearing his steeps comming down the hall she puts her hands around her head wishing nothing more but to be dead..he calls her name she shakes in fright maybe she well only get own hit tonight..he stops at the door lising for a sound soon anofe shes on the ground...this girls life it ended fast everyone new she wouldent last..



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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2007-09-12 10:07 PM


Welcome to the blue pages of PIP!  Your poem would do better if it were posted in one of the poetry forums.  This one is more for discussions than poetry postings.

Your post is so very sad, I pray it's not something happening to you or yours.  Unfortunately, we know these things do take place far too often.

  God bless,
     Rae

[This message has been edited by sandgrain (09-14-2007 09:33 PM).]

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