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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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0 posted 2007-01-10 09:13 PM


A Place.....
Do I really have one?  
I don't know now,
I thought I did..lol I guess I don't.  
So sad I am right now,
so very sad...
Everything misunderstood..
when I only spoke from the heart.  
Should I not speak at all,
am I not allowed an opinion,
a thought, a need, a want or an expression?  
Must everything be questioned, as if I've committed a crime?
Should I be accused, based on assumptions?
I thought I was the center piece,
I thought I could express freely,  
but I guess I can't.....  
Do I really have a place
or was it just a thing to say..
I don't really know....
So sad I am ...
so very sad..  
don't know what else to do,
don't know what else to give....
if my love is not enough..


11/09/06

Jen

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-01-12 09:31 PM


Is this a poem, cos it sounds like one, maybe you should try posting it one of the poetry forums istead of a talk forum and you will get more replies. unless this isn't a poem and then i missed the whole point ...
hunnie

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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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2 posted 2007-01-13 10:33 AM


It appears you've been deeply hurt by one who's taken advantage of your loyalty and openness.  Do you feel deceived? Used? Confused?  Alone?

You need a sincere warm hug, (perhaps an apology), and someone to confide in.  If you can't count on the one you love to offer it, detatch and move on is my advice.

   Rae

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