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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 01-10-2007 09:13 PM       View Profile for MindBodySoul   Email MindBodySoul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MindBodySoul

A Place.....
Do I really have one?  
I don't know now,
I thought I did..lol I guess I don't.  
So sad I am right now,
so very sad...
Everything misunderstood..
when I only spoke from the heart.  
Should I not speak at all,
am I not allowed an opinion,
a thought, a need, a want or an expression?  
Must everything be questioned, as if I've committed a crime?
Should I be accused, based on assumptions?
I thought I was the center piece,
I thought I could express freely,  
but I guess I can't.....  
Do I really have a place
or was it just a thing to say..
I don't really know....
So sad I am ...
so very sad..  
don't know what else to do,
don't know what else to give....
if my love is not enough..


11/09/06

Jen

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1 posted 01-12-2007 09:31 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Is this a poem, cos it sounds like one, maybe you should try posting it one of the poetry forums istead of a talk forum and you will get more replies. unless this isn't a poem and then i missed the whole point ...
hunnie

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2 posted 01-13-2007 10:33 AM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

It appears you've been deeply hurt by one who's taken advantage of your loyalty and openness.  Do you feel deceived? Used? Confused?  Alone?

You need a sincere warm hug, (perhaps an apology), and someone to confide in.  If you can't count on the one you love to offer it, detatch and move on is my advice.

   Rae
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