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Mr. Omniscient
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0 posted 10-29-2006 11:07 AM       View Profile for Mr. Omniscient   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mr. Omniscient


Captivation

Once I saw you I said to myself
“Whoa who is that!?”
I was captivated…
I thought I must’ve hallucinated;
My legs vibrated and I hyperventilated.
I blushed; I was humiliated…
I slid away; slowly I faded.
My path to you was gated…
Your friends stood by so close I could only make inspections;
For my resentment towards rejection and the expectation of the hall bringing their attention to me show my affection.
I got to admit… I fled and went to my connection.
You can be intimidating I must admit with
Your friends around and your popularity;
I hope my wrongful choice doesn’t bring my chances to an end.
I didn’t want to offend,

I just wanted to let you know how I feel instead of leaving it on the shelf…
I’m sorry I can’t come out and reveal myself…
Well I guess I can only pray that you aren’t already with someone else…
Juju
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1 posted 10-29-2006 12:27 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

This is a very nice poem.  This isn't a poem forum. Typically If you go to main forums, that is either work shops of poetry forums. (:

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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2 posted 10-29-2006 11:34 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

yes i really liked this poem although yea this isn't the place to post but i will be looking out for your poetry where ever you decide to post...
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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3 posted 10-30-2006 07:43 AM       View Profile for Mr. Omniscient   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mr. Omniscient

Thanks again... I'm still not very good yet at find the right topic.
 
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