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Kimberly ann
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0 posted 06-13-2006 10:29 PM       View Profile for Kimberly ann   Email Kimberly ann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kimberly ann


I won’t let a single tear drop from these eyes.
No silent screams from these lips.
No sharp movements from my body.
No arguments in my head.
No bleeding from my heart just because you left me.

It was hard to see you go but no one shall
know how I feel I won’t take sympathy.
The sun may be out but all I see is a rain
cloud over my head. But I refuse to feel this
pain you gave to me.

Tears fall from my eyes.
Silent screams of frustration from these lips.
Bleeding from my heart, just because you
left me here in this world that I have yet to figure out.

Rain may be falling over my head but I keep moving
forward towards the sun with every step I take and
every breathe I take comes a new beginning.
Nan
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1 posted 06-14-2006 12:01 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Kimberly, you've put a lot of thought into this "think positive" poem.  It's a good philosophy to live by.

You're pretty new with us, and no doubt still learning about all of the nooks & crannies PiP  has to offer.  You're posting a poem here in "Feelings," which is really a discussion forum.  Perhaps  you'd like a moderator or an administrator to move it to a poetry forum for you?  Folks aren't looking here in this forum to read poetry, so you might get better feedback if we do - just a suggestion.

Let us know if we can help you.  Welcome to PiP, btw...
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2 posted 06-14-2006 04:38 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Yes, I agree. Kimberly, I betcha you would enjoy it in the Teen Forum. You are a teenager aren't you? They have a good group in that poetry forum.
Write On !!
hugs, Chris
 
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