Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
Kimberly, you've put a lot of thought into this "think positive" poem. It's a good philosophy to live by.
You're pretty new with us, and no doubt still learning about all of the nooks & crannies PiP has to offer. You're posting a poem here in "Feelings," which is really a discussion forum. Perhaps you'd like a moderator or an administrator to move it to a poetry forum for you? Folks aren't looking here in this forum to read poetry, so you might get better feedback if we do - just a suggestion.
Let us know if we can help you. Welcome to PiP, btw...