just out of reach
Hi Kimberly. Welcome to Passions. I think that your work is well written, but perhaps it would get more replies if posted in one of our Discussion forums. Maybe in Feelings or Lounge? Take a look around and see what suits you the best. Here in Open it is mostly poetry.
Have fun here and don't let all the worries of school, friends, family get you down. Write it out and remember that life is what YOU make it. So...make it great!