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jarrett
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0 posted 05-13-2006 12:04 PM       View Profile for jarrett   Email jarrett   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jarrett


Here am I
there are you
waiting for forever
in this garden for two

Here am I
Dreaming of you
There you are
Staring at her

Waiting for forever
To hold your hand
In this garden for two
But

Here am I
There are you
In two separate worlds
Waiting for forever
In this garden for two

Those who say sunshine bring true happiness hasn't danced in the rain!!!

Mysteria
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1 posted 05-13-2006 12:30 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Jarrett, I loved your first poem - but I do believe you have posted this in the wrong area, as this is a discussion area.

Perhaps email a Moderator or Administrator (click  the link on top of the page), and ask them to move your great offering from Feelings to Open Poetry,(or if you are a teen,) to the Teen Poetry Forum.  It won't get many readers in here.

BUT I sure enjoyed it and
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2 posted 05-13-2006 01:40 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jarrett~
A hearty WELCOME to PiP !!

Your thoughts flow poetically beautifully~

I would agree that this beauty will get more reads in one of the other forums ...
but, hey, ... it definitely has feeling~

We have so many forums for you to choose from and know you'll find many readers to cultivate as friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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sandgrain
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3 posted 05-13-2006 06:35 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

I was surprised to find this in here, but I do want to bid you a warm welcome.  Nice work.

   Rae
jarrett
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4 posted 05-13-2006 10:54 PM       View Profile for jarrett   Email jarrett   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jarrett

Sorry ya'll... I am new here and just trying to figure things out... thanks for your kindness.
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5 posted 05-21-2006 10:33 PM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

Welcome to piptalk! Yeah I agree. You did post this in the wrong area. Really nice work. It flows very well and has good structure. Gosh I really getting worse and worse at this. lol. Bravo.

                 Jessica  
 
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