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Aenimal
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0 posted 12-10-2005 07:05 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

okay, so i'm notoriously hard on my writing, but out of all the poems i've written, i can only think of maybe 10 that actually work. sure, alot of them were experiments with different styles, and some of them were simply emotional purges..but daaaaamn. why didn't anybody tell me how bad i was? i beg anyone who's curious(i dunno why you would be), if you ever must view my archives, limit it to open#30 and up, when i had some sense of what i was doing....arghhhhhh

serenity blaze
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1 posted 12-10-2005 07:13 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Are you questioning our judgement?
Aenimal
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2 posted 12-10-2005 07:14 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

with regards to my stuff, judgement aaand sanity. pblllllt
#30 and up!


hockey's on..i'm off you
serenity blaze
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3 posted 12-10-2005 07:18 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

He's questioning our judgement.


pblllllt yerself.



(ooh. Sounds like fun. brb.)
icebox
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4 posted 12-11-2005 09:50 AM       View Profile for icebox   Email icebox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for icebox

You SUCK!

I do not happen to believe that, but any time you are feeling especially self deprecating please feel free to read this...if it helps.

ALL poetry has flaws.  It is a human thing.  Get over it and write some more of your special take on life.  Please.
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5 posted 12-11-2005 10:35 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

I'll swing in right behind icebox here....

I remember telling you once that some poets are dancers, and some are boxers. There's grace and beauty in each, poise and balance in each, directed strength in each.

You're a boxer, and a damned good one....I'm a dancer. Sometimes I find that very limiting, and I come to you for lessons in how to do that other thing. I sincerely hope you keep giving them.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Sunshine
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6 posted 12-11-2005 11:16 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I like Serenity's reply,

Icebox's comments...

and Ratleader's wisdom.

Me?  Heck, Raph, I'm always questioning my judgment - self-imposed, that is.

But I never question your art.



So there.

littlewing
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7 posted 12-11-2005 11:40 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

the archives are evil . . . and if you didn't think that even one thing you wrote was not perfect, well then, where would be room for constant learning?

I read the crap I posted, it was crap too and My God, I was flitting about . . . you guys amusing me - maybe waiting until one day I made sense.

*laughing here*

and yeah, you do suck Raph, so bad that everyone reads your writing, My God, isnt there someone over there that can smack ya a good one for me?  

See?  When I feel like that, I simply smack myself . . .

*grin*

As a matter of fact, ALL the greats thought they sucked.  

So there.

I like what Kari said about art.  So very true.

Aenimal
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8 posted 12-11-2005 11:49 AM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

i didn't say it aaaaall sucked. just a solid chunk of it.

thanks for the support, as always, i wasn't fishing for any i was just venting. i am, however, pleased by the people who've responded here. all happen to be fantastic writers and more importantly people i admire

even the chick from buffalo with the spanking fixation.. :p
littlewing
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9 posted 12-11-2005 05:45 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

you are so dead, you Canuck.

(that made me laugh and so what? There is nothing wrong with fixations.)

plbbbbbbbbbbt!
http://www.skypoint.com/members/schutz19/ccanuck.htm

Aenimal
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10 posted 12-11-2005 07:02 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

he was a tool, guardian was much cooler
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Guardian_%28Marvel_Comics%29
Kaoru
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11 posted 12-11-2005 10:09 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Raph, you silly canuck! I love your writing, and you know, I know everything. :P
littlewing
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12 posted 12-11-2005 10:09 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

thats X-Men and Marvel, doesnt count . . . he probably stole his idea from a poor innocent American, probably even a New Yorker!  



Yeah, baybayyyy . . .
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Captain_America
RSWells
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13 posted 12-14-2005 01:16 PM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

I wish we could self-delete here. I'd barely have even an archival presence were it so. Believe me, I understand the original post, I'd venture that I'd probably run from all but a handful of my attempts at literacy.
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14 posted 12-14-2005 01:44 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes



I love your writings.....
Nightshade
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15 posted 12-14-2005 11:20 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Raph! You're Canadian? Well I'll be a monkey's ... aunt.
Aenimal
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16 posted 12-16-2005 03:43 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Chris ye didnae know? I'm a Toronto boy who hates the Leafs and loves the Habs
Midnitesun
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17 posted 12-16-2005 04:54 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun


ok, so are you fishing for
(1) complements?
(2) more pbllltt fun?
(3) startin a who-sucks-worst-or-best contest?

and surely you know I have a bigger suckier archival doo deposit than you sweetie
littlewing
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18 posted 12-16-2005 05:35 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

I would guess all of the above  



and uh, you guys . .  c'mon .  . my stuff just started to make sense . . . don't even go there.

Midnitesun
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19 posted 12-16-2005 05:56 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

well, none of mine are good enough to ARCHIVE
and very little of it makes sense cuz the world doesn't make sense, and therefore I am very readable...and usually right, right, even though I am generally left of the world's  fulcrum balance point ???huh???
never mind
I am going to hang out in the corner and holler
NEENER NEENER in a cool chorus line
Midnitesun
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20 posted 12-16-2005 08:43 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

ahem
your presence is requested in the alley
please read Jaime's post
huggs to you
and its ok to read mine if you want a laugh lol
AND? don't anyone let Richard Wells delete and damn thing! lol
latearrival
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21 posted 12-17-2005 06:22 PM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

I would think everyone who writes at all has some regrets and some successes. That is life in itself.

Yes DO Not let R Wells delete anything. Let it all stay. And please R. Wells, we miss You. do post soon.  
 
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