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spritrider87
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0 posted 03-17-2005 03:26 PM       View Profile for spritrider87   Email spritrider87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spritrider87


I just wrote a poem. posted in dark poetry. the title. The End Prehapse A Begining. And I wanted to explain it a bit. It is not supposed to be scary or offend anyone or even hint at death or the likes. But it might. Because this is the last poem I will be posting here. Or anywhere. I need to figure out where I'm going. who I am. What I've become. And I have to get out of the grasp of a mental demon in the process. This will take time. And prehapse when I am donr I will come back. But I dout it. I guess what I am saying is that this is my good bye. and for those of you that I have reached. i'm sorry to leave you so suddlenly. my e-mail address is spritrider87@yahoo.com talk to me anytime. so long friends and thank you for your time. your support and your words of whisdom.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

MGROVES
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1 posted 04-17-2005 05:56 AM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

take care~
your spirit wants to fly
yet your fear keeps you grounded
follow your gut feelings but listen
to your heart, your growing, your healing, yet it is hard to move on, i totally understand, i have been there, we will always endure pain of some kind, oppisition of some kind, but we must not put our life on hold, do what makes you happy, it is your life, if you fall, like we all do, get up and know that didnt work so try something else, till it works, your smart, your caring, your creative and talented, share your gift,  you may not realize it but your reaching out, touches others who are in need themselves, or just need to heal old wounds that keeps them chained.  take care   you'll be alright,  i feel it. you will be great, actually

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

spritrider87
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2 posted 04-24-2005 03:10 PM       View Profile for spritrider87   Email spritrider87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spritrider87

Thank you. I guess maybe I was running away too. but Until I know why I am going to stay away from these sites. I will be back though. I promise.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

Juju
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3 posted 04-25-2005 01:45 AM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

I actually understand.  Sometimes Poetry can cause harm, by making one dwell on the subject.  I will pray for you.  The best advice I can give you is to pray. It sounds corny, but sometimes demons fear the light.  You may disagree with me, but I found that when I told some one I trusted... a preist or my family, it makes things alot easier to recover. Admitting is the first step. Then not to hide. then to say no - start little and make your way up. These "demons" often get worse with stress. So be wary and always aware thatthe temptation is there.

Good luck my friend.
-Juju

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spritrider87
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4 posted 05-02-2005 05:20 PM       View Profile for spritrider87   Email spritrider87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spritrider87

Im afraid of light too. I stopped beliving a while ago. and I cant trust my family. I have said no. but its hard to be taken serious when no one realizes you truly are human and not some rag to be used and thrown away.

As I look at this world and realize that I am the only one to have seen the end of all Good I let the tears out that and ask the world to see them.

Juju
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5 posted 05-02-2005 09:42 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Well, You could try confiding in a psychologist... but they cost money. You have to try. BElieve me.  The only reason you can't trust, is because of the demon.  It doesn't want to leave you and it will do any thing to stay. Mental illness or just any thing negative it has that effect.  You got to beleive in your self.  It is really hard. but find a way to release in a pausitive way. Try volinteer work. sometimes that helps too.

If you lost your faith I will keep you in my prayers, my friend if that is all I can do.


Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

spritrider87
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6 posted 05-03-2005 11:43 AM       View Profile for spritrider87   Email spritrider87   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spritrider87

I am actually in counceling and i am going to keep posting here. wweeeeeeee! Im on a sugar high
Jian
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7 posted 05-03-2005 10:17 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

(:
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8 posted 12-11-2005 11:05 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

i can understand where you are coming from;l too have a family i cant trust. its not from something inside of me, its things that have been done. i have let go, and given trust to them, but nothing ever seems to change.  there my family, i love them, but i am me , i have my own life, so i just stay away.  they cant help who are what they are. they only know what they know. so accept that and move on.  i know it doesnt stop the hurt. but eventually when its looked at differently. it does.  your are special, yuou have a gift.  a free spirit  keep it.  take care

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

 
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