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TearDrop17
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0 posted 2004-03-02 03:20 PM


ok well where to start on how i feel well im just going to let it all go even if i shead these tears that fall down my checks.
well ok i feel depressed and anger cuz i dunno how to show my emotions and i dont really express myself other then writing poetry thats how i express my feelings that hide all inside of my heart.so i wrote 2 poems.

you look at me as though im invisible
you make me feel like i just want to die
i just want to runaway to take away
all my tears and fears
i feel like no one can make my heart go back into pieces
no on can ever fill the whole in my soul
no one can ever stop the rain that
falls in my world
no one can help me when i get lost on my road of
pain
you look at me as though im trash
no one can make ma feel like a diamond cause
ill never shine like a pearl
i feel that im going to fall from heaven and never
be the angel you want me to be
i feel that your never going to forgive me in your heart
i cause you all this pain and sorrow
i feel theres nothing i can do to make you happy
even if i tried it wouldnt amount
to the way you
feel.

____________________________________________________


As i look into your eyes to see your soul all i
see is emptiness and sorrow you cant look any one
in there eyes you hide your
feelings as if your icy cold you hide
your smile with a frown of tears as i feel
drops of rain upon my soul it shatters my heart
into
pieces of glass as my heart brakes my soul
flys with the angels in heaven.

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1 posted 2004-03-03 06:44 PM


I am so sorry you feel this way, maybe you should join us here and post your poems for all to read, we are a great community of support....hugssss and hope to see you joining us...

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darkness_witch
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2 posted 2004-03-04 12:40 PM


[Post removed - Ron]

[This message has been edited by Ron (03-04-2004 07:38 AM).]

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3 posted 2004-03-08 12:23 PM


Writing is how i have managed  to get through many losses in my life , so don't get to depressed , cheer up your a great poet , keep writing and think ahead to the future , don't let the past weigh you down
take care

JW

a123
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4 posted 2004-03-30 08:43 AM


Hey cheer up.im sure things will be all right and even if they arent its OKAY.there are alot of ppl out there who go through  lot of difficult times,your not the only one.

you can write to me if you feel like talkin 2 someone.

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