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BlackRose
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since 2003-08-27
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0 posted 2003-08-28 12:29 PM



I am an angel who weeps for sinners.
I am the hurt that stays with you forever.
I am the love destined to never be yours.
I am the death that seeks you out relentlessly.
I am the life which you cling to mightliy.
I am the forever that is.
I am the tears that fall from your eyes in despair.
I am the goddess whos rage is unmatchable.
I am the fear that creeps up on you unexpectedly.
I am older then the dawnings of time.
I the child at the breast of darkness come.
I am...that which you are not. Sombody whose voice will never be heard in this damnable world.  And so it shall be with the fallings of time, that which is written will be forgotten. Man lives, man dies,man rots and so it shall be and nothing....nothing more.

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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2003-08-28 06:00 PM


This is definately an interesting write. WELCOME TO PASSIONS (since I missed your first one).
I look forward to reading more of this.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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2 posted 2003-08-29 09:37 AM


Rose, this is an awesome write,
the ending is not so bleak, I know it may seem so, why have you posted here . . .
let this write breathe in the forums.  
You can go to Open or Dark. let me or any moderator know if you want this moved.
Yes, welcome
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2003-08-29 01:11 PM


Yep..I agree, and think it should be in dark...

Nicely written.

Susan

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