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50 posted 08-07-2003 08:11 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

gravely
I look this away
your acid eyes
what you are hideing
in that head of yours?

awake to the sound of my own breathing
I hear you whisper
there's no reason to be silent

I'm talking to myself
can you hear me?

don't go to sleep
don't close your eyes...

I have no motive but flight we should do a duet with this or something. I'm paranoid and you are vicious


insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-07-2003 08:20 PM).]

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51 posted 08-07-2003 08:25 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

hehe, we would make an interesting poem...hmmm mabe we should do a duet? whatcha think

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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52 posted 08-07-2003 08:27 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

umm genius..look at my above reply okay

insanity is not a crime

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53 posted 08-07-2003 09:41 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

blech

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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54 posted 08-08-2003 03:55 AM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

smiling at Mikey . . .
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55 posted 08-08-2003 07:05 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Liz (Wind) the question was for Riley, but the song is Iris by Goo Goo Dolls

when everything feels like the movies, yeah you bleed just to know you're alive

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56 posted 08-08-2003 08:34 AM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind



what are you 'bleching' at?

lol Sue..what part? I tend to smile when he calls himself an approachable poet with candy clouds of lullaby.

I think Riley was stalling because she didn't know  
insanity is not a crime

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57 posted 08-08-2003 11:21 AM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

fyi, insanity is a crime,i could be sent to jail for it well uh....yea,

i'll e-mail you liz, mayb we can get sumpthin started..


ri

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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58 posted 08-08-2003 11:49 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Go fr it!


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59 posted 08-08-2003 12:20 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Anyone have something to say? before I start singing again

insanity is not a crime

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60 posted 08-08-2003 12:24 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Liz, this exactly:  an approachable poet with candy clouds of lullaby.

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61 posted 08-08-2003 12:31 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

in my field of paper flowers/walking through a field of molten flowers/the landscape's burning red/the landscape's burning red hot

(combination of two songs)
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62 posted 08-08-2003 12:40 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

oh how I long for the deep sleep dreaming...in my feild of paper flowers
If I had a feild of paper flower's I'd set them on fire and go oooh the colors

mwahaha..Riley..added more lines


insanity is not a crime

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63 posted 08-08-2003 12:51 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

it doesn't matter if we all die/ambition in the back of a black car/in a high building there is so much to do/going home time/i'm going under/drowning with you
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64 posted 08-08-2003 12:57 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

100 years/ going under

ugh..I have a nosebleed..eww and my hands are bloody
whatever tomorow brings I'll be there with open arms and open eyes


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65 posted 08-08-2003 01:38 PM       View Profile for Riley   Email Riley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Riley

muhaha, i added more lines to your added lines ( this could get very long couldn't it? )


lol, i am insane am i not


muah

ri

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66 posted 08-08-2003 01:51 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I like my lines that I just added...you'd better like them or else heh heh heh.

insanity is not a crime

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67 posted 08-08-2003 05:17 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum81/HTML/000453.html
there ya go

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68 posted 08-08-2003 06:12 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

And so another thread reaches the end of its lifespan.
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69 posted 08-08-2003 06:37 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

tis true...my short attention span's getting the better of me. goobye thread

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