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Greeneyes
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0 posted 2002-05-14 02:18 PM



ever been so completely taken by someone
you just fumble your words....nothing you say
comes out right....it's all good but you cant say it in a way that makes sense....LOL

*s i g h*


yup thats the feeling of the weeeekkkkk....for me anyway.....




I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.





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Christopher
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1 posted 2002-05-14 02:48 PM


ahhh - so that's why your last email made no sense.

hugs you

Opeth
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2 posted 2002-05-14 03:06 PM


Yes, I even wrote a couple of poems on the subject.
Greeneyes
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3 posted 2002-05-14 03:20 PM


LOL Christopher......

Oh I sent that?? thanks for the smile.... and hugsssss

LC~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Greeneyes
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4 posted 2002-05-14 03:21 PM


Opeth~

I cant even get the words down correctly....thanks for your smile as well...hugssss my friend...


LC~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-05-14 03:27 PM


I've noticed your writing has taken a different turn of late....a good one...
more sensual...lol...now I see why!

Yes, I still get that way...
all tongue-tied in front of someone...
someone..who is, oh so saxxy!

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6 posted 2002-05-14 03:52 PM


Uh huh. That's why I write the words instead. My favorite part of a relationship is when y' get past that point, and can be friends an' lovers in every sense of th' word -- no discomforture.

Good luck!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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7 posted 2002-05-14 09:37 PM


Lauren....gosh,  I thought that was just me
getting older and confused....

Guess not....

YEP,  been there and done that....

Hope it all unwinds and becomes sensible
soon for you....

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8 posted 2002-05-15 12:02 PM


Enjoy it!  Worry about "un-fumbling" it later, just feel all warm and fuzzy for now.  
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9 posted 2002-05-15 12:50 PM


I have definately been there.  Sometimes I still fumble and stutter *chuckles* Isn't it wonderful *hugs*

Tara

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10 posted 2002-05-15 03:58 PM


yes. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Christopher
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11 posted 2002-05-15 04:21 PM


so tell us about this person Lauren...
Greeneyes
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12 posted 2002-05-15 04:35 PM


Thank you for all the responses.....hugssss all around.......

LOL Christopher, thats a DIFFERENT email....   
Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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13 posted 2002-05-15 10:21 PM


definitely . . .
Greeneyes
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14 posted 2002-05-16 05:50 PM


Lone Wolf~

thanks my friend, so nice to know others have been there....its been such a long time for me...to have these feelings...and I cant shake it....nor do I want to.....even though its in the "making" lol I do just fumble my words....


sorry I ramble....

*sigh*

Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

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15 posted 2002-05-20 05:15 PM


lol~ yeah, I do it all the time.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

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16 posted 2002-05-20 05:21 PM



Well I disagree.  I haven't seen you fumble yet.  What I have seen is that you have taken on a sense of style and grace that only makes me envious...

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17 posted 2002-05-21 09:01 AM


Yes, I sure have. But as for you, I have seen nothing but beautiful writing, no fumbling apparent.
Sandra

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