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Justbleu
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0 posted 2002-01-26 03:34 AM


My Dad died of a massive stroke at age 54 on New Years Day 2002....I miss him very much.  I'm doing ok....everything is just strange and kind of surreal feeling to me.  I want to share one of two poems I wrote my parents for there anniversary on July 20, 2000.  This is the one I wrote for Dad....I love you Dad....Love Bridge  

Papa I love you
In all your ways
Let me see the ladybug
You and I found today

Can we go sledding??
Out in the clean white snow
My wooden sled it is red
Down the hill we go

Today I ride my tricycle
Around and around I go
Circling the house outside
Singing songs I know

You watch me out the window
And wave and smile at me
This I love about you
As I go around and sing

Today we go to DisneyWorld
And ride fast through a mountain
It goes really fast through space
It was so much fun I thought

We went to visit Mommy
Wow I have a little brother
I thought he'd be a girl
Can I hold him please??

Sitting on the couch
I hold him in my lap
I in pink with a big cheesy grin
You aim and click

Daddy today I get a bike
You pick it out with me
We brought one home
A banana bike it be

You and I love ice cream Dad
To Dairy Queen we go
Mom gets a shake, and you get a cone
Me, I love butterscotch sundaes

I'm growing older every year
Childhood passing through
But, I love you Dad
For I am still your little girl

You've seen me through a lot
School plays you came to see
And graduate I did too
Both you captured on video

Hey Dad I start college soon
I am so excited
Because I hope to be a teacher
I hope I finish soon

This weekend we go to Hope
To dig and play in the dirt
A ride or two, 4 wheeling we go
My younger brother he's there too

We sit by the fire
I talk and talk and talk
You say a lot of interesting things
I learn from you so much

It's so quiet and peaceful
Except for brother teasing me
Watching this fire with you
Lets roast a marshmallow or two

These days you let me know
What you want for me
My boyfriend is a dork
You say, "I'll take him mining"

Some time has gone by
Still in college plugging away
I hope to be a teacher
Someday maybe

Dad you drive me to work
Sometimes from school
For in the winter
It gets soo dang cold

Wow I met this great guy today
He works with me Dad
I just know you'll love him
For he's nice and sweet

It is so strange
But I decided today
That this is the time
I will be moving away

I talked about it so long
I will be going to Oregon
As I said a few years ago
Give me a hug Dad I will be ok

In all of my life
You have been my Dad
Through highs and lows
You love me so

It's funny how you tease me
I tell everyone it's cuz you love me
For I let them know if you ignore
They best stay away for you don't like them

This day I write you Dad
And tell you how I feel
Hugs and kisses I send
Without you it would be unreal
I love you so much and always will


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (01-26-2002 03:40 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2002-01-27 03:41 PM


I'm so sorry you lost your dad, Bridget - especially at such a young age... Your poem is a truly wonderful tribute to the great relationship you had with him... You're surely expressing your sincere feelings here - and doing it in style - It's a wonderful piece...  

This is, of course, a discussion forum - Wouldn't you like to share this in a poetry forum where it will receive more attention?... God Bless, Bridgette

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2 posted 2002-01-27 05:21 PM


oh my gosh, I am sorry to hear this bad news. My father has heart problems and already had a heart attack and a stroke, so he is in bad shape and will not live much longer the doctors say. I will be a wreck the day he passes on. (hugs) Feel better soon because dad is always with you in spirit. email me anytime if u want to talk.

Joanna

Justbleu
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3 posted 2002-01-29 02:24 PM


Thank You Nan and Rose Petal...it helps to talk and to tell people about my Dad.  


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4 posted 2002-01-29 02:56 PM


Your dad is watching down on you and your family, Bridget. This poem is so sweet--your family must be so close. You all will be in my prayers.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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5 posted 2002-01-29 03:59 PM


HUGS.
Moon Dust
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6 posted 2002-01-30 10:50 PM


Sorry to hear that but this a lovely tribute.

Write what you feel, feel what you wrtie.


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7 posted 2002-02-06 03:08 PM


(((Warm hugs)))

Charisma

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8 posted 2002-02-06 09:42 PM


Bridgette~
Honey, I'm so sorry for your loss~
I just found this today or I would have contacted you sooner~

I lost my father at the age of 14 ... and it's tough~
I am praying for you and your family~
E-mail me anytime sweetie~
I care~
Love to you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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