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The most Beautiful thing I've ever read

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Saxoness
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0 posted 03-20-2001 12:23 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Hey guys, I'm not sure if it's ok to post this poem here, but since it's not by me, and I want to post it because of the way it made me feel, maybe it is ok. I ALSO want to say that Desperado didn't write this poem for me, I just happened to read it on the main site, and I thought it was the most beatiful poem I've ever read. (especially this part
"and in the night I'll hold you
until the sun appears" wow thats so great)

Evermore
by desperado

wait
just a moment in time
freeze
the movie in your mind
put aside the whispers
filter out the doubt
look into my eyes
ignore the muted shout
don't you wish to melt away?
into the golden sun?
don't you want to whisk away,
and have a little fun?
aren't you sick of pain
and fear inside your life
all I know inside of me
I want you as my wife
I'm tired of the race
I'm ill with blank disgrace
I want the world to leave us be
I want the world to set us free
take my hand and smile
you can let those tears fall
I'll make it worth your while
and always give it all
through good and bad I'll love you
through thick and thin I'll stay
from the blinking of the sun
to the fading of the day
and in the night I'll hold you
until the sun appears
I'll take away your sorrows,
and cast away your fears
so let our love combine us
and let our spirits soar
just take my hand within you
and I'll love you evermore


"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Acies
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1 posted 03-20-2001 01:15 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

awwww..That is so beautiful
I love it

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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2 posted 03-20-2001 01:22 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

This should go in the Awwwwwwww post in the alley

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3 posted 03-20-2001 04:20 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

This IS a beautiful piece... but what exactly do you feel as you read it? It must have been powerful, since you decided to post it in here!
Saxoness
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4 posted 03-20-2001 04:57 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

Man, it really took my breath away. The feelings expressed here...I would definately want a proposal like this. It made me feel simply wonderful. I had to share it with others.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Fading Away
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5 posted 03-20-2001 08:06 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

This is a beautiful poem! I agree Dopes, it should go in the alley! Wow.. what a great poem. I'm going to have to add this to my library. Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

WhtDove
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6 posted 03-21-2001 10:28 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well, aren't those words enough to melt a women's heart?

This is beautiful, and I hadn't had the pleasure of reading it before.
Elizabeth
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7 posted 03-21-2001 03:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

That is sweet! I'll have to find it on the main site and print it.

Thanks for letting us know about it Angela.
Irish Rose
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8 posted 03-21-2001 03:30 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Marry this guy!!!!!!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Saxoness
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9 posted 03-21-2001 05:53 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

lol@Kathleen


JDW

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Dee
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10 posted 03-21-2001 07:18 PM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

For those of you who want it for your library, here's the link.
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum4/HTML/003186.html
It was so beautiful I had to find it.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

 
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