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David Generous
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0 posted 12-23-2000 04:32 PM       View Profile for David Generous   Email David Generous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David Generous



  The way she smiles makes me happy
  When she looks at me with her blue eyes I feel her love
  Her love touches deeply in my soul longing for her touch I feel a sense of peace
  When she holds me, I feel like crying tears of Joy
  Shes an angel that God sends in my dreams to comfort me
  Someday I will hold my angel and she will bring me to his Kingdom
  Ill depart this world in peace my angel will take all fears away


~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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1 posted 12-23-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for ~*~PrettyGirly~*~   Email ~*~PrettyGirly~*~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ~*~PrettyGirly~*~'s Home Page   View IP for ~*~PrettyGirly~*~

hey it's the little devil. sweet poem i like it bye.. ~*~PG~*~  

A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time

a_little_girl
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2 posted 12-27-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for a_little_girl   Email a_little_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a_little_girl's Home Page   View IP for a_little_girl

Wow....really nice work you have here...I like the way you described a first encounter w. love...ah...love...


"My soul lives in love, walks with serenity, and dies in violence."
--ALG



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Dark Enchantress
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Beautiful poem David...best of luck with your love.  

Live and let live.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~

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Good job on this one david......i suggest you post in Teen forum or in the Open poetry forums.......you'd get more replies.
Good one though!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

 
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