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monique
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since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2000-06-23 02:26 AM


i think we are too far gone
(i never know if i should write to or too, anyway)
we are to far gone to change this world
we are going to pot
i heard some people say the sun is getting hotter yep we are getting closer to hell
not heaven
this earth is our prison and we don't care about it anymore
we are digging our own grave
we leave some old men sit in their excrement
how much longer do we have to change diapers
why do we even start
a life that we abandon
to start another child
to follow in our footsteps
the same mistake over and over
war and famine
why do we go on?
It bugs the hell out of me
to the point of insanity
i want to know why
were we created?
why is it a mystery?
why can't we just tell the truth?
why do we have to lie sometime?
why can't we be truthfull all the time?
i will be o'right tomorrow
but right now i want to know
write it down
and tomorrow i will read it
and will think
this is so stupid
all these words
trying to express
torment


monique


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X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
1 posted 2000-06-23 05:37 PM


Yanno Monique I have had some miserable times too.....but why don't ya take a walk into the woods, or go to the sea...and see then how you feel about life. This is a beautiful earth...there are beautiful people here, you just gotta look past the ugly to see the beauty.

~Heather

monique
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369
Louisiana
2 posted 2000-06-23 07:52 PM


i know i've got to come out of this gloomy mood. Thank you to remind me about the trees and the seas and the bumble bees.
i saw one today and it did perked me up a bit to see it roaming around my flowers.

monique

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