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zippi
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0 posted 12-27-2004 05:15 PM       View Profile for zippi   Email zippi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zippi


I feel as though I've been here before
And yet I'm locked outside the door
Why I wonder, should it be
That no one wants to hear from me?
Am I not made of flesh and blood
Just as I'm sure, are you
Why than do you shun my light
Does it not shine as true?
Let me in, I beg of you
Let my voice be heard
I flutter just outside your door
A lonely winter bird.
Rene`
ESP
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1 posted 01-02-2005 01:14 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

"I flutter just outside your door,
A lonely winter bird"

I like those lines, but the whole thing is really pretty
Lizzie

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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2 posted 01-02-2005 02:16 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

How strage a coincidence - I have chickadees sitting on everything possible staring at me outside my window, wondering where I put their feeder, and then I sat for a second before putting it back to read this?  

Anyway, it is a lovely verse, and really wish it was posted in Open so others could read it.  Beautifully done!


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3 posted 01-07-2005 10:37 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

I remember this from long ago - the feeling of being outside - wrote a lot of poetry about it when I was young - then I discovered, I had to become comfortable within my own skin first - before I was willing to let others in - ironic, but I think I was the one keeping others out by my feelings of not being good enough - thank Heaven for the years of passing and growth and coming in to my own skin -

Hugs - this is well understood - I too think it would do well in open -

  Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

 
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