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poyy
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0 posted 01-06-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for poyy   Email poyy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poyy



En Una Palabra

Cuando solo quería quererte
la inseguridad me alejo de tí
ahora no puero ya ni verte
ahora no sé que hacer de mí
porque nunca tendré lo que perdí:
estar contigo y hacerte reir,
y ahora me odio, ya yo morí,
ya yo perdí y no sé que decír
sabiendo lo mal que te he hecho sentír
mi corazón hace un escándalo,
¡tan alto que no me deja dormir!!
..."¿Que decir?", he hestado pensándolo...
Quizás lo resuma todo en "perdón"
porque es que esa no fué mi intencón.

                   -Audberto Antonini.


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I wish I could remember some of my Spanish...but it's been too long...sorry.

Welcome to Passions, Poyy!  

Anybody here speak Spanish?  

 Denise

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I am in level 3 spanish, so I understand some!  I'm interested in hearing a translation though!  Welcome to passions!

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


poyy
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3 posted 01-07-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for poyy   Email poyy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poyy

  First thank u for the welcome, and since not all people can understand spanish ill have to translate this poem to english as best as i can (considering the either untranslatable words or the ones i forget its translation), but it will lose its metric and rhyme with this change...    *sad face* (cant seem to make one lol)

here goes:


In One Word

When I only wanted to love you
insecurity drove me away from you
I now cant even see you
now I dont know what to make of myself
because ill never have what i lost:
being with you and making you laugh,
and now I hate myself, ive already died,
i have lost and i dont know what to say
knowing how bad i made you feel
my heart makes such noise,
so loud that i cant even sleep!!
..."¿what to say?", ive been thinking about it...
Maybe ill just say "sorry"
because that wasnt my intention.

                   -Audberto Antonini.





[This message has been edited by poyy (edited 01-07-2000).]
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Interesting. This is probably an impossible request unless you can make a wav file, but I think I'd like to hear it recited in Spanish. I have no idea what it would say or what it says, but to hear the language would be wonderful.
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5 posted 01-09-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful thoughts in your translation, Poyy! I, too, would love to hear it read in Spanish!  

 Denise

 
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