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Rene_M
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since 11-19-1999
Posts 27
Melrose Park, IL, 60160


0 posted 11-19-1999 03:57 PM       View Profile for Rene_M   Email Rene_M   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rene_M's Home Page   View IP for Rene_M

My life has been
A never ending roller coaster

Ups, Downs, I've been through them all
Seems like I've always taken a terrible fall

No matter what I do
or where I go
I always end up in pain.

Emptiness
Loneliness
Sadness
Insanity

These are my symptoms

Is there anybody out there?
who can help me
from this madness

Step forward, you are welcomed

Anybody out there?
willing to spend their time
with....me
Who wants to give it a try?
Who wants to help?

Any kind of help is welcomed
I will open the doors
but I must warn you
what you're about to find out
can be very Realistic
Painful
Depressing
Upsetting

Maybe even shocking and somewhat disturbing

Do you still wanna go in?
One other thing though
Once you go in
You may never go back

Outside, could be very pleasant
Inside, you can only find the truth
Which could be both...pleasant and painful

So, what side of the door
would you like to be a part of?

[This message has been edited by Rene_M (edited 11-19-1999).]
starboards
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since 10-14-1999
Posts 469
longwood, florida


1 posted 11-21-1999 06:51 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I'll go in, i'm here for u!
danni
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since 11-20-1999
Posts 693
wisconsin


2 posted 11-25-1999 01:28 PM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

I feel exactly the same way most of the time.
So I guess I'm already in the same place. Just in a different corner. I'll step forward.
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