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I Dread the Thought of Being Alone

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PartiStarks
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since 07-31-99
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0 posted 07-31-99 12:45 AM       View Profile for PartiStarks   Email PartiStarks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PartiStarks

An internal emptiness blakens my heart
For external loneliness is where the complexity starts
Fears of eternal seclusion shares a large part
of why I Dread the Thought of Being Alone
No ear to listen nor shoulder to cry
An overwhelming feeling that hurts deep down inside
No one to respond to my question, "Why?"
I Dread the Though of Being Alone
No funny face smiling upon my arrival at home
No tender embrace or any love being shown
It's like walking into darkness or into a place of the unknown
I Dread the Thought of Being Alone



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pandora
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1 posted 08-09-99 06:21 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

I just couldn't leave this emotive poem of yours sitting here all alone without any responses. As far as the content of your poem, yeah, it really sucks sometimes to be alone. Other times, I like it a lot. Why don't you post this in Open Poetry?
PartiStarks
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2 posted 08-10-99 02:24 AM       View Profile for PartiStarks   Email PartiStarks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PartiStarks

I have posted it in crytical analysis and I got some pretty encouraging responses.

Thanks for your support.


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PartiStarks
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3 posted 08-10-99 02:25 AM       View Profile for PartiStarks   Email PartiStarks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PartiStarks

I have posted it in crytical analysis and I got some pretty encouraging responses.

Thanks for your support.


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Lynx
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4 posted 08-13-99 06:36 PM       View Profile for Lynx   Email Lynx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynx

Pets can keep you from feeling alone.
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