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Open Poetry #39

Love's interact

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2006-10-07 06:09 AM

No feather floats by at this time of night
when birds are asleep and only I weep
and trees no longer seek autumn relief
in the spring of a life beginning again.

There are words in the quiet of solitude
like the longing within coming out in the world
not slow like the growing but a speedy unfurl
of love’s so intense emotional needs.

Summer forestalls for one moment more
to watch and wait for the shiver and shake
to cease and recede like leaves under rake
dispatched to the fire of sated desire.

The end comes in with the breathe, breathe in,
of the so cold alone winter repose
and the dream, the feel, in sudden foreclose
succumbs to the rise of reality.

Summation unsteady moves around views
and I can say nought but that a soul pact
impacts on a mind true love’s interact
when the birds are asleep and only I weep!

Helen / 7 October 2006

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-10-07 02:24 PM

Helen

Any season or place, you are not the only one that weeps. You pulled me in, and took me to winter come spring.

[This message has been edited by Martie (10-07-2006 03:37 PM).]

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2006-10-07 02:58 PM

Honeybunch,

Wink. Sometimes I am moved in such a way after reading a poem, that I am unable to grasp words to amply respond. This is such a time.

misce'

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2006-10-07 05:20 PM

Nice writing...James

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