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Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
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since 2006-07-04
Posts 24
germany

0 posted 2006-10-06 03:06 PM


Opened up to you like no before
Wasn'y enough you wanted more
Don't know how to give it can't you see
Threaten me, go on accuse me
Show me your version of trust
Go ahead do what you must
Always love you even if you never understand
Give you all my heart and soul I can
It may not be enough for you that saddens me
Maybe on day you'll be able to see
It's all I had even though it wasn't much
By your estimation I couldn't measure up
Isn't that just my luck
All the love i finally muster through pain
Isn't enough

Everyday I see a sunrise is a blessing, Every night I see the moon rise is a miracle.

© Copyright 2006 Albert D.Lopez - All Rights Reserved
Copperbell
Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

1 posted 2006-10-07 02:25 AM


so sad
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2006-10-07 07:29 AM


ouch
Kira Aso
Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
3 posted 2006-10-07 09:26 AM


Very sad!

But it's a great write!

Sending hugs and hershey bars you're way!

~Kira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2006-10-07 06:16 PM


Love has no value when given to the wrong person...when given to the right person, it is embraced as a precious gift...James
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