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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2006-10-05 10:35 AM



warm summer evening
such beauty to fill the eye
as the naked moon stood still
on your bare shoulders


CG

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-10-05 01:12 PM


CG~
So softly beautiful~
Something this lovely needs a title~
May I suggest - Naked Moon ?
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~*Marge*~

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The Lady
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2 posted 2006-10-05 01:40 PM



oh
my
this is just lovely...

CastleGuard
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3 posted 2006-10-05 06:55 PM



Marge - thank you, I considered it, but all my poems of this style are untitled.

The Lady - thank you for reading.

CG

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-10-05 07:48 PM


The moon was naked, her shoulder was naked ~ and you?!?

This truly was lovely, CG.

Love & Moon Light
EA

CastleGuard
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5 posted 2006-10-06 12:49 PM




Aaahhh...but my Dear Lady of the Earthly Wings...

...some mystery must remain...

CG

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